Post by flamekit on Jul 27, 2008 11:10:56 GMT -5
First off, this is not based off of any Warriors site I know of. It is a completely made up story of love, war, and tragedy.
Starclaw shook his blue-grey pelt, the morning sun making it shine like Silverpelt. He padded towards the freshkill pile and grabbed a plump thrush. He sat next to the pile and finished the prey in a few gulps. He looked around the camp. He saw his apprentice, Nightpaw, padding towards him eagerly. It's time she was made a warrior. he thought to himself. “Are we going to battle train today?” she asked pleadingly. “No, I'm going to give you an assessment.” Starclaw replied coolly. Nightpaw's eyes shone with excitement and she grabbed a pigeon before heading to the tree stump to eat it.
Starclaw padded silently behind Nightpaw. So far, she had caught a rabbit that was twice her size, a plump thrush that was nearly as big as her, and a mouse that could feed all the kits in the nursery. She was now stalking a squirrel. She silently closed in on the plump creature. When she was close enough she pounced. But the squirrel was quick and ran. Nightpaw scrambled after it. She was heading towards the Riverclan border. The squirrel climbed a tree and jumped over the river that formed the border. Nightpaw stopped and turned around. She ran back into the forest in search of more prey. But Starclaw ran straight into the river! “Help!” he yelled.
Starclaw woke up to see a beautiful golden she-cat standing in front of him. He coughed and got to his paws.”Th-thank you.” he stammered. “Your welcome” the she-cat replied calmly. “I'm Starclaw of Thunderclan. What's your name?” he mewed, dazed by her beauty. She had bright blue eyes and a golden pelt with darker flecks. “I'm Goldenheart of Riverclan.” she mewed, “You'd better get home, goodbye.” “....goodbye....” he replied.
(Tell me what you think! If you like it I'll finish it.)
Starclaw shook his blue-grey pelt, the morning sun making it shine like Silverpelt. He padded towards the freshkill pile and grabbed a plump thrush. He sat next to the pile and finished the prey in a few gulps. He looked around the camp. He saw his apprentice, Nightpaw, padding towards him eagerly. It's time she was made a warrior. he thought to himself. “Are we going to battle train today?” she asked pleadingly. “No, I'm going to give you an assessment.” Starclaw replied coolly. Nightpaw's eyes shone with excitement and she grabbed a pigeon before heading to the tree stump to eat it.
Starclaw padded silently behind Nightpaw. So far, she had caught a rabbit that was twice her size, a plump thrush that was nearly as big as her, and a mouse that could feed all the kits in the nursery. She was now stalking a squirrel. She silently closed in on the plump creature. When she was close enough she pounced. But the squirrel was quick and ran. Nightpaw scrambled after it. She was heading towards the Riverclan border. The squirrel climbed a tree and jumped over the river that formed the border. Nightpaw stopped and turned around. She ran back into the forest in search of more prey. But Starclaw ran straight into the river! “Help!” he yelled.
Starclaw woke up to see a beautiful golden she-cat standing in front of him. He coughed and got to his paws.”Th-thank you.” he stammered. “Your welcome” the she-cat replied calmly. “I'm Starclaw of Thunderclan. What's your name?” he mewed, dazed by her beauty. She had bright blue eyes and a golden pelt with darker flecks. “I'm Goldenheart of Riverclan.” she mewed, “You'd better get home, goodbye.” “....goodbye....” he replied.
(Tell me what you think! If you like it I'll finish it.)