Post by <<Brennan>> on Oct 17, 2007 13:08:44 GMT -5
((The Doctor said Cheetahclaw is going to be leader...so i'm going to Powerplay his death...tell me if you want to change it))
Cheetahclaw walked into the camp, a large rabbit hanging linply from his jaws. He could hear a slight weasing from underneath the Falcon Log, where Blackstar's den was. He heard his name... "Cheetahclaw..."
Blackstar weased, his voice thin and quite. He slowly put down the rabbit, and walked into the den, pushing back the lichen from the doorway. "Yes, Blackstar?" He meowed, poking his head in. "Cheetahclaw, I'm dieing." He weased. Cheetahclaw's eyes grew wide. "I'm not afaraid, Cheetahclaw. But there's-" He cut off, in a spasm of coughs. "Theres something you must know. Whitestorm if not the cat to lead this Clan." He coughed less this time, the light starting to die in his eyes. "I say these words before StarClan...Cheetahclaw is the new deputy of FalconClan..." The words started out slightly stronger than before, but died away to nothingness as his white body went limp...
Lightpaw, one of the older apprentices and Blackstar's apprentice, walked to her mentor's den. The white and ginger she-cat was going to ask if they might go for hunting practice, but as she drew closer, she could hear the sound of weasy coughs, and these words:
"I say these words before StarClan...Cheetahclaw is the new deputy of FalconClan..."
She walked slowly in, to see the golden spotted tom arching over the Clan leader, amber eyes wide. "Blackstar!" She cried, bounding over to her mentor as his body went limp. She licked his ear. All apprentices dreaded the day their mentor died, but this was also the Clan's leader. She looked up at Cheetahclaw. "He just died..." She whispered."I know. I must tell the Clan. and Whitestorm." He meowed quietly, head hanging low but eyes filled with suprise and wonder, also a hint of fear.
He wandered out of the dark den, , blinking in the sunlight. "Whitestorm?" He meowed, looking for the white tom.
Cheetahclaw walked into the camp, a large rabbit hanging linply from his jaws. He could hear a slight weasing from underneath the Falcon Log, where Blackstar's den was. He heard his name... "Cheetahclaw..."
Blackstar weased, his voice thin and quite. He slowly put down the rabbit, and walked into the den, pushing back the lichen from the doorway. "Yes, Blackstar?" He meowed, poking his head in. "Cheetahclaw, I'm dieing." He weased. Cheetahclaw's eyes grew wide. "I'm not afaraid, Cheetahclaw. But there's-" He cut off, in a spasm of coughs. "Theres something you must know. Whitestorm if not the cat to lead this Clan." He coughed less this time, the light starting to die in his eyes. "I say these words before StarClan...Cheetahclaw is the new deputy of FalconClan..." The words started out slightly stronger than before, but died away to nothingness as his white body went limp...
Lightpaw, one of the older apprentices and Blackstar's apprentice, walked to her mentor's den. The white and ginger she-cat was going to ask if they might go for hunting practice, but as she drew closer, she could hear the sound of weasy coughs, and these words:
"I say these words before StarClan...Cheetahclaw is the new deputy of FalconClan..."
She walked slowly in, to see the golden spotted tom arching over the Clan leader, amber eyes wide. "Blackstar!" She cried, bounding over to her mentor as his body went limp. She licked his ear. All apprentices dreaded the day their mentor died, but this was also the Clan's leader. She looked up at Cheetahclaw. "He just died..." She whispered."I know. I must tell the Clan. and Whitestorm." He meowed quietly, head hanging low but eyes filled with suprise and wonder, also a hint of fear.
He wandered out of the dark den, , blinking in the sunlight. "Whitestorm?" He meowed, looking for the white tom.