Post by Temperance Rose on Oct 20, 2007 15:34:19 GMT -5
Ok, maybe because England are losing the world cup I'm more irratable than usual.
I few days before my birthday I wrote a Brennan/Booth short story. I showed it to my friendwo insisted I posted it on this site (Link below) I did and soon forgot about it.
I checked now and I have good comments but there is one that really irratates me.
There is such a thing as constructive critasm! S/he didn't tell me what was wrong and not reading after that, in my opinion, is just rude!
www.youwriteonline.co.uk/readarticle.php?article_id=147
I few days before my birthday I wrote a Brennan/Booth short story. I showed it to my friendwo insisted I posted it on this site (Link below) I did and soon forgot about it.
I checked now and I have good comments but there is one that really irratates me.
Parmenion on October 04 2007 13:04:43
reword this bit
i think you could describe this bit a bit better.
again this could be better
Sorry i stopped at that point.
Why fan fiction, you have the ability to write the action scenes, if some of the description could be better and more real.
Why not write your own use your own characters??
when she seen him
reword this bit
Brennan felt the breath rush out of her as it knocked her stomach
i think you could describe this bit a bit better.
the effects of the crash getting to her slightly
again this could be better
Sorry i stopped at that point.
Why fan fiction, you have the ability to write the action scenes, if some of the description could be better and more real.
Why not write your own use your own characters??
There is such a thing as constructive critasm! S/he didn't tell me what was wrong and not reading after that, in my opinion, is just rude!
www.youwriteonline.co.uk/readarticle.php?article_id=147
