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Post by <:♥The Doctor♥:> on Nov 5, 2007 2:43:47 GMT -5
The night was thick and heavy with the mist that covered the moonlit cave that formed the Doveclan camp. Through the leafy entrance of the camp lurched a dark black figure, Two fraile, limp bodies in his jaws. Midnightflame stumbled slightly across the cold, hard ground under his paws as he collasped in the center of the camp, the limp golden figure of the leader and the brown body of the deputy falling to the ground.
Midnightflame pushed his nose into the dead leader and deputy's fur in turn, muttering his appologies and grief for them before looking up, the haunting figure of the shadowed cloud over the moon that rippled as flames still fresh in his mind.
The Black tom moved silently across the the Dove rock, leaping up with ease and giving a loud yowl of calling to the clan. 'All cats of Doveclan! Please Gathering In The Main camp area! Sunstar And Gorsetail Are dead!!!' He yowled, his voice full of grief.
The thin golden spotted she-cat moved silently from the den, her eyes flickering with fear as she looked across the camp as the image of the moonlit panther of flames that had covered her dreams. Spottedpaw moved silently across, pushing her small pink nose into the fur of the late leader, muttering her wishs for Starclan to accept the young leader before moving to the deputy. |
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Post by <<Brennan>> on Nov 7, 2007 12:41:54 GMT -5
Featherbrook was grooming her black and brown streaked pelt when she heard the voice of Midnightflame. She gasped and turned, bounding out of the den and into the clearing. "How did it happen?" she whispered to Midnightflame, pretty eyes wide with fear...
Hollypaw lifted her brown tabby head. She had been sleeping warmly next to Spiderpaw, and was not happy about beeing awoken like this. She sighed and walked slowly out into the clearing. She gasped and stopped in her tracks as she saw the bodies of her leader and Gorsetail...
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Post by Snowpaw on Nov 7, 2007 21:38:53 GMT -5
Whitepaw was taking a nap in his soft green moss when he was woken up by the voice of midnightflame. Whitpaw unsteadly walked out from the apprentices den to see what all the comotion was about, when he saw the bodies of his leader SunStar and Gorsetail. 'oh my what on earth happened here' thought Whitepaw as he saw Hollypaw and ran over to her and said "what happened to them how did they die i just saw both of them yesterday they can't be dead," meowed Whitepaw desperitly.
((is this long enough everyone elses seem to be so long))
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Post by <<Brennan>> on Nov 8, 2007 13:30:43 GMT -5
((i'ts fine. Just try and add commas to the words and it'll be perfect!))
"I don't know," whispered Hollypaw, blinking green eyes from Sunstar to Whitepaw to Midnightflame to Spiderpaw and back again. Her breathing was shallow and stiff, a horrible feeling creeping from the pit of her stomach to the ends of her limbs.
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Post by Temperance Rose on Nov 8, 2007 13:48:58 GMT -5
"Oh great Starclan" Spiderpaw mewed, bounding over to meet Hollypaw as he supported her "Steady" he mewed softly in her ear and gave her a comforting lick as he looked sorrowfully at the bodies of the cats he had looked up to most, his leader and his deputy.
Forgottensoul raced into camp "StarClan help us!" she mewed and padded over to Midnightflame, burying her face in his fur without even thinking.
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Post by <<Brennan>> on Nov 9, 2007 10:11:56 GMT -5
Featherbrook bent her head in sorrow, resisting the urge to run as far and as fast as she possibille could.
Hollypaw turned and burried her face in Spiderpaw's pelt, tears welding up in green eyes.
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Post by <:♥The Doctor♥:> on Nov 9, 2007 16:14:42 GMT -5
Midnightflame almost leapt backwards when forgottensoul came over but instead he licked her ear comfortingly, smiling softly before looking down at the cats below. The black tom's blue gaze flickered on the two dead bodies before up to featherbrook and the two apprentices.
'Cats of DoveClan. This morning when sunstar, gorsetail and myself were on patrol, we were attacked by two dogs who slaughtered our leader and deputy. I managed to fight them off but now we are without a leader or deputy. Gorsetail was the first killed when sunstar was still dying.'
Midnightflame took a small gulp, unsure what to say after his sign since no cat would believe either sunstar's new deputy words or the sign over the moon.
'Starclan sent me a sign, just before the meeting of a black panther of flames across the stars. I'm pretty sure that it means Midnightflame is meant to be the new leader.' a small, rather soft voice called out across the camp from the tiny spotted medicine cat apprentice. Spottedpaw looked up at Midnightflame, dipping her head to the tom. |
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Post by <<Brennan>> on Nov 9, 2007 16:23:13 GMT -5
Featherbrook gave a small intake of breath as she looked over to the medicine cat apprentice. "Midnightflame is going to be our leader?" She asked, wondering if she had got the meaning of the vision right.
Hollypaw looked out of Spiderpaw's fur, over at Spottedpaw. "Really?" She mewed softly.
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Post by <:♥The Doctor♥:> on Nov 9, 2007 16:43:12 GMT -5
Spottedpaw gulped, nodding. 'Thats what I've seen and I think it does mean that yes, Midnightflame is meant to be our leader. Its starclan's choice.' The spotted she-cat looked down at her paws sheepishly before getting up and looking around for Silvermoon. |
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Post by <<Brennan>> on Nov 13, 2007 13:55:47 GMT -5
((whos silvermoon?))
Featherbrook drooped her head and looked down. She couldn't do this...after...his death...She slunk back to the Warriors den.
Hollypaw looked back at Spiderpaw.
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