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Post by <<Brennan>> on Oct 15, 2007 13:17:14 GMT -5
Sagepelt, now completly cooled off, walked into a sunny clearing in the forest, and licked one paw. He sat down in the shadow of a thistle bush, and waited for Fallpaw to come.
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Post by Snowpaw on Oct 15, 2007 13:32:50 GMT -5
Fallpaw caught up and as she was trying to catch her breath said "So Sagepelt what are we going to in traing today?"
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Post by <<Brennan>> on Oct 16, 2007 11:49:32 GMT -5
((hmmm...try to make them a bit longer...use commas and maybe say what she's saying, or explain her sorroundings. just helping  )) Sagepelt smiled at her eagerness. "Well...I think for our first lesson, we will do a bit of battle practice." His made his pelt bristle. "Pretend I'm a FalconClan warrior. What do you do?" for now, keep claws sheathed! he silently hoped. His pelt was warm in the sunlight, though he was crouched in the shade, it was still warm. |
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Post by Snowpaw on Oct 16, 2007 12:43:39 GMT -5
((thanks))
"Do you try to find a weakness or try to sneak up on them," said Fallpaw "Like when hunting a rabbit, a vole or a squirrel" Fallpaw added, looking around noticeing they were close to owlclan territory.
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Post by <<Brennan>> on Oct 16, 2007 13:22:50 GMT -5
((Much better!))
Sagepelt nodded. "But first," He added, bunching his muscels, "You attack!" He pounced on her, claws sheathed, bowling her over. He pinned her down. "Now what?"
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Post by Snowpaw on Oct 16, 2007 13:34:38 GMT -5
((Thanks  )) Fallpaw pondered for a few minutes then mewed " Try to claw at your belly so that you will let go, then try to get on your back and sink my claws into the fur on your back so you can't get me off." |
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Post by Bren on Oct 16, 2007 15:45:00 GMT -5
"Then do it!" Sagepelt grinned, happy that his apprentice knew what to do, but captivated by the fact that she just said it and didn't do it. What an unusial cat... Sagepelt thought. This wasn't a bad thing, just different. A good training thecnique, though.
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Post by Snowpaw on Oct 16, 2007 15:54:52 GMT -5
"Okay." Fallpaw mewed. Fallpaw lifted her hind legs, keeping her claws shethed because she didn't want to hert her mentor, raked them along the underside of Sagepelt's belly and then leaped and landed on Sagepelt's back and gently dug her claws in to the ends of the fur just enough to keep a grip and not get thrown off but not hurt him.
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Post by Bren on Oct 16, 2007 17:21:19 GMT -5
Sagepelt instinctivly fell to one side, letting his body go limp as he lay ontop of Fallpaw. His sides rose and fell, but his breathing was slow and hardly vissable...he looked dead...
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Post by Snowpaw on Oct 16, 2007 17:47:33 GMT -5
Fallpaw was wondering why Sagepelt was lying on top of her, she could tell he was alive, she could here his breathing. "Hey Sagepelt why are you just lying there i know your not hurt or dead because i can hear your breathing," Fallpaw mewed curiosly to her mentor.
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